In writing the humorous mystery series The Accidental Detective, I explored different types of humor writing. My previous posts addressed physical comedy and quirky characters. Today let’s explore wordplay, including puns, with one example from Something Shady at Sunshine Haven and another from Felony Melanie in the Big Smashup.
Wordplay is simply the manipulation of language with the intent to amuse. Types include Double Entendres ("I used to be Snow White, but I drifted.” (Mae West), Tongue Twisters, Malapropisms (the mistaken use of an incorrect word in place of a word with a similar sound, to humorous effect, as in “A rolling stone gathers no moths.”) and Puns. While some of these forms of humor may be disparaged, they were
For most of us, a few puns go a long way, but they can add a chuckle to any story. Here’s an example from Something Shady at Sunshine Haven. Kate has had to admit to her father that she’s investigating suspicious deaths at the nursing home where Kate’s mother now lives. He wants to help and thinks the other senior men in his coffee group would also help.
“If I . . . if we can reduce the list of people to investigate, we can focus on
the most likely culprits,” I said. “That does mean more internet research but
also talking to people or maybe following them.”
“I can help with that. In fact, all
the fellows could help. They’d like to, I’m sure.”
what had I started? “Dad, it has to be confidential.”
“We don’t have to tell them
everything. We can ask them to follow specific people, find out certain things.
They won’t ask why if we say it’s a secret. The men in my coffee group may be
old retired guys, but we have a lot of life experience. And a lot of free
Having a whole group of helpers
might save time and effort, or it might turn the investigation into a Keystone
Cops comedy. “I don’t want to put anyone in danger.”
“I’ll make sure they understand,
but we’ve survived this long. Most of them will think it’s fun, being private
detectives for a while.”
I pictured a bunch of seniors in
trench coats and fedoras. “Sherlock Holmes had his Baker Street Irregulars, the
ragtag kids who gathered information for him. I get an old guys brigade?”
“We could call ourselves the Coffee
Shop Irregulars.” He chuckled. “Although at our age, we spend a lot of time
trying to be ‘regular’!”
Men. No matter how old they got,
they still loved a poop joke.
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The Teenage Adventures of Felony Melanie series is based on characters from the movie Sweet Home Alabama. People in the South enjoy a lot of humorous sayings, which means that my cowriter and I can draw on those sayings or make up our own.
Here’s an excerpt from Felony Melanie in the Big Smashup, where the girls are annoyed that sexism is keeping Melanie from participating in the junior demolition derby:
Melanie glared back toward the
cabin [at the junkyard]. The porch was empty, so either the boys had gone
inside with Mr. Hopkins, or he’d taken them in another direction to find the
parts they needed. “Grumpy old fart,” she muttered. “I’ll show them a thing or
“Don’t let it bother you,” Dorothea
said. “As my grandpa would say, old man Hopkins is a turd in a punch bowl.”
“My mama likes to say folks like
him have the personality of a dishrag,” Lurlynn said.
Melanie started to smile. “He’s as
windy as a sack full of farts.”
“He’s so country he thinks a seven-course
meal is a possum and a six-pack,” Dorothea added.
Pretty soon, the girls were
shrieking with laughter. Melanie hoped Jake heard it all the way to wherever
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